i am a person, and that is good (poem)

in the beginning

two cells

the distance for one to travel, immense!

He knows…

could this Adam and Eve please stop fighting?

could they stop being so busy?

aren’t they willing to close the gap?

it must have seemed like thousands of miles

but the other cell waited patiently

in warmth, in the dark, prepared for the most intimate connection with life-giving blood

the beginning

two cells meet

against all forces

with millions of other choices

only one is allowed to pass

with entrance, the soul ignites!

He smiles at His beloved…

already a daughter, a son

definitely human

beginning

multiplication with so many possibilities for error

the manifestation increases

exponential growth

matches made

complete

complete

complete

what a masterpiece!

in the darkness

no eyes could see

i am a person

what else would i be?

maybe not perfect

but everybody

needs a beginning,

is a person,

has dignity

you exist, and that is good

you are loved

what could be better?

*Copyright 2013

This is in response to the people who have made my poem, I am a good person (poem), the most read poem on this blog. I have a feeling that people were looking for something else every time they used search terms and found “I am a good person” by yours truly. They may have been disappointed since that poem was about the phrase “I am good person” people use, which sometimes is used as an excuse to continue hurting others. However, I know there are people out there who are despairing and do not recognize their inherent dignity as a person as well as the inherent dignity of others, so I thought I would add this poem to be in that family of poems.

Let me know what you think…

God bless!

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poetry, articles, thoughts, and quotes... on a quest to be authentic in my motherhood, sisterhood, and daughterhood, but i can tend to become Juvenalian sometimes, maybe in writing but also in life, reading Swift's "A Modest Proposal" as if i were hearing a friend speak to me about the how ridiculous some ideas can become, especially when they begin to drift into reality, mocking all of us really... i identify with Mary Magdalene, James, and Peter and am extremely grateful for that woman who said, "Yes!"...oh and i can be pretty lame...blessings to you, dear reader...pray for a single mother, her children, and the father of her children today!
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